A glance at two pie charts provided reveal respondents of 2 different age categories, including under 30 and over 30 who say what make them most happy.
It is evident that achievement at work is a thing which make people in both age groups feel most happy. Additionally, people under 30 year old are more likely to travel and have a good appearance to make them happy, whereas respondents over 30 feel happy when they are being with their family and financial security. Meanwhile, the percentage of people in two age groups doing hobbies and other factors as making them most happy are quite similar.
The proportions of respondents saying achievement at work as their happiness are the highest figures in both age categories and similar, at 31% and 32%. This is followed by 18% of them who think that having a good appearance (under 30) and 20% of people who say financial security(over 30). Otherwise, the young spend their time travelling as bringing them happiness, at 15%, while the thing making them feel happy is being with their family, at 14%.
Doing happy is also important for those groups, the second largest percentage of both age groups mention doing hobbies as making them most happy. Finally, the smallest percentages of happiness in younger and older people are from other factors which represented 14% and 10% respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: feels
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...roups doing hobbies and other factors as making them most happy are quite similar...
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...similar. The proportions of respondents saying achievement at work as their happ...
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..., while the thing making them feel happy is being with their family, at 14%. Doi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, second, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1114.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90748898678 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65139689411 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52422907489 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6284877135 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.777777778 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2222222222 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326893729041 0.215688989381 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154420352982 0.103423049105 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750584280535 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219549749887 0.15604864568 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482142358073 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.