In some countries, young people have become richer, healthier, and live
longer, but they are less happy. What are the causes? What can be done to address this situation?
The alarmed problem in developed countries is that the young is turn into wealthier, healthy and also has a longer life, however they are sad and not satisfied. This essay will look at some primary causes of this and offer some possible solutions to the issue.
The first reason is, nowadays, the materialistic life is extremely common with young people. In other words, this notion related to people who think mainly about physical things, immediate benefits and highly respect individual profits. So, they tend to overlook everyone around them and also mental values. As a result, even though they are wealthy but always feeling sad. Furthermore, this lifestyle often turns the youths into a selfish person, which makes them being solitary. The second reason is, the development of social media have a strong affect beyond our imagination. Today, earning money on the internet is not a new definition with young people. These platforms help them being financial free, but have to spend a huge amount of time with virtual spaces. Consequently, they can be overwhelming which causes emotional disorder.
Moving forward, some measures can be taken to withdraw these problems. Firstly, by reducing pressure and expectation for young ones is considering as a long-lasting solution. In other words, this is thought to be the root cause, which makes them want to be successful as soon as possible. Considering the positive side, if they do not need to pay attention to those ambitious things, they will have time spend for themselves such as their passions and then being more happiness. For instance, join in drawing or painting classes can boost their positive feeling. Moreover, parents should encourage their children, instead of liken them with others.
In conclusion, there are various factors leading to this problem and measures above can be implemented to tackle or help young people to develop into happier citizens in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 686, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to be' or 'be'.
Suggestion: to be; be
...young people. These platforms help them being financial free, but have to spend a hug...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18152866242 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6065531717 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62101910828 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7909090354 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3888888889 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4444444444 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.22222222222 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239707019433 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685653432793 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04520126538 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150927461496 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246248957835 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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