These days, science and technology has been evolving at a higher rate. This has resulted in higher rate of life expectancy ratio to be boomed up in last few years. This advancement has certainly increased the ratio of population from earlier times. Herein, i firmly believe that this development has more of advantages then just demerits.
Firstly, the rapid change in science and technology has provided us with the privilege where people can live longer than in past. As a result this has made the older generation to stay motivated till they can contribute to one’s country. Nowadays, people at the age of 70 also have some contribution in the overall all enhancement of the economy. For instance professions like writer, lawmakers, scientist, and many more have a lot to put forth the country's contribution. This not just allows the country to improve but also helps older generation to stay intact with all the social awareness around.
Furthermore, in this modern world grandparents are the only concerned ones for the offspring’s as are the only valid provider for upbringing except parents. They have a greater role to play this way as they will share their own experiences with them to make children vulnerable to the environment around. For an instance, if older people are the best people who can nourish their grandchildren.
To conclude, the improved medical care and facilities has made it possible to have longer expectancy life it is just a myth that they are a burden to the society. I believe that this way they are equal contributors in the enhancement and development of country working towards making a nation standing successful in all spheres.
- With a fast pace of modern life more and more people towards fast food for their main meals.Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. 56
- Some people believe that a country becomes more interesting and develops faster when its population includes a mixture of different nationalities and cultures . To what extend do you agree or disagree? 61
- Students in school and university learn far more by lessons with their teachers compared to other sources(example: television and internet). Do you agree or disagree? 78
- Some people think that money is the best gift for teenagers Others disagree Discuss both these views and give your opinion 67
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement? 61
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 170, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...ratio to be boomed up in last few years.This advancement has certainly increased the...
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Line 1, column 253, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e ratio of population from earlier times . Herein, i firmly believe that this deve...
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Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e rapid change in science and technology has provided us with the privilage where...
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Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... privilage where people can live longer then in past. As a result this has made the ...
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Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...ilage where people can live longer then in past. As a result this has made the older ge...
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Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...re people can live longer then in past. As a result this has made the older genera...
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Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... motivated till they can contiribute to ones country. Nowdays, people at the age of ...
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Line 3, column 348, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...verall all enhancement of the economy. for instance professions like writer, lawma...
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Line 3, column 395, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tance professions like writer, lawmakers , scientist, and many more have a lot to ...
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Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...only conserned ones for the offsprings. As they can provide them the valid upbring...
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Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Foran
...ern vunerable to the environemnt around.Foran instance, if older people are the best ...
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Line 7, column 161, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...th that they are a budern to the soceity . I believe that this way they are equall...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, then, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0652173913 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8566150843 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594202898551 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2477728374 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.538461538 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198123876148 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625833303445 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458715718244 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114211437861 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294800048842 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 170, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...ratio to be boomed up in last few years.This advancement has certainly increased the...
^^^^
Line 1, column 253, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e ratio of population from earlier times . Herein, i firmly believe that this deve...
^^
Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e rapid change in science and technology has provided us with the privilage where...
^^
Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... privilage where people can live longer then in past. As a result this has made the ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...ilage where people can live longer then in past. As a result this has made the older ge...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...re people can live longer then in past. As a result this has made the older genera...
^^
Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... motivated till they can contiribute to ones country. Nowdays, people at the age of ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 348, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...verall all enhancement of the economy. for instance professions like writer, lawma...
^^^
Line 3, column 395, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tance professions like writer, lawmakers , scientist, and many more have a lot to ...
^^
Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...only conserned ones for the offsprings. As they can provide them the valid upbring...
^^
Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Foran
...ern vunerable to the environemnt around.Foran instance, if older people are the best ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 161, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...th that they are a budern to the soceity . I believe that this way they are equall...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, then, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0652173913 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8566150843 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594202898551 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2477728374 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.538461538 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198123876148 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625833303445 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458715718244 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114211437861 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294800048842 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.