What are the pros and cons for children of watching television?
Nowadays, the trend of watching tv is becoming increasingly popular, especially for children. They spend a good amount of time in front of tv watching their favourite shows. Many people consider watching tv as a beneficial activity for children. However there are both advantages and disadvantages of it. In this essay, I will discuss both sides and will give my opinion.
Let's begin by looking at the advantages of watching tv for youngsters. one of the main positives is that it provides a wide range of knowledge on various topics. What I mean by this is that children can get information just by watching tv. For instance, when children watch in tv that
wooden furniture catches fire easily, they will deduce that wood is vulnerable to fire. This can make children more informative.
Secondly, tv shows encourage children to follow good habits. For example, children tend to follow their hero's activity. When their heroes follow good etiquettes, it is highly possible that they will also follow him.
Turning to the other side of the argument, addiction to tv may affect health of the children. Many people believe that children spend more than 3 to 4 hours per day in front of tv screen which deteriorates their eyesight and may leads to obesity also.
Another issue is that young adults may be influenced by the actions which are harmful for themselves. For instance, youngsters may start smoking cigarettes or consuming alcohol without knowing the consequences following their favourite character's actions. It can be especially challenging if not monitored at an early stage.
All things considered, television has both benefits and drawbacks for children. Although, it can help youngsters to gain knowledge and to follow good habits, it may also leads to health issues and and bad habits. In my opinion, the pros of watching tv outweigh the disadvantages because I believe that children are able to choose proper content use their time wisely.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08385093168 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78209740478 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552795031056 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1662601602 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9523809524 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7619047619 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294388131307 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935084574851 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840794172467 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13785474183 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0865894041071 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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