Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
You should use your own ideas, knowledge, and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
In recent years, plenty of concerns about the arts have become widely popular in many parts of the world. While there is a school of thought that authorities should spend financial budgets on public services instead of on the arts compared as a waste, I partly disagree with this belief. I hold an opinion that that investment in the arts has a necessary significance and money should be spent on social aspects including the arts.
On the one hand, spending on types of the arts plays crucial roles not only for social life but also for the development of people’s mental health. Without any doubt, people could pay thousand dollars for the arts because of their values, both bring creation and agriculturing temperament. For example, stress and anxiety would be decreased when people were immersed themselves in the rhythms of music or stories of their favourite film. In addition, kinds of the arts, such as music and theatre, also create loads of benefits for the national economy. Thanks to jobs associated with the arts, it is said that unemployment could drop. As a result, the economy of the country would be boosted.
On the other hand, the arts as well as public services should be concerned by the government, which helps inhabitants to have happy and wealthy life in the community. When it comes to other aspects like heathy aids or food policies, the arts cannot supply those physical materials for humans to survive in society. Unless scientists invent a kind of medicine which could completely treat the metal problems, humans still need the arts to wash off the concerns, worries coming from the rat race. According to a survey of the press, children with autism are able to be cured, if they have opportunities to contact the arts such as painting and composing.
In conclusion, the authorities should reasonably invest money in social services and the arts, as well. Although there exists the doubt of benefits of the arts, it cannot be denied their values towards human’s life and mental health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91812865497 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54676180492 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570175438596 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0702542142 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.133333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152818782165 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532194715109 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569707716003 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101727811231 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542503107189 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.