The argument makes a number of unstated assumptions regarding the recommendation to launch free plays in the park program which is predicted to increase profits by bringing audiences. The plan is based on the success of a similar endeavor by another theatre. Taken as a whole , these unstated assumptions render the argument highly suspect . Indeed, if the assumptions do not hold true , the argument totally falls apart.
First of all, the decline in profits and decreasing attendance at theatre is attributed to a failed advertising campaign. This assumption that the marketing advertisement campaign has failed and goes on to overlook any other factors that might have contributed to the same. Declining general interest in theatre can be one such factor as with changing trends people have gradually looked to other forms of art or changed platforms to digital. Another factor can be the overuse of the themes or maybe the same plays are being repeated in the theatres for years now that has led to a loss of interest and declining attendance. It might also be the case that people are bored of the interiors, decoration, or the overall vibes of the theatre, which has led to their absence. So a marketing campaign cannot be solely attributed to decline in profits. These concerns should be thoroughly analyzed to deduce the genuine issues and then they should be suitably addressed. Otherwise, the play at the park might prove to be a futile effort as well.
Secondly, the marketing director believes that the success of the Avon Repertory Company can be replicated. There are a number of assumptions under the same as well. For instance the increase in profits may not be the direct result of park play but cutting down costs, while people attendance might have remained the same or even decreased this not mentioned in the argument. It might also be the case that Avon Repertory Company leading to an increase in the profits may have increased the ticket prices. Even if the profit increase can be attributed to the free park play, the same tactics might not be applicable today as they did it 2 years ago. These same tactics might not just work today for the Classical Shakespeare Theatre productions. The marketing director should look at the recent social trends and decide on capitalizing or them and may be even use the social media. Unless, the above concerns are addressed relying singly on a free park play program may prove deleterious.
In conclusion, it can be said that the argument makes a number of unstated assumptions that seriously undermines its validity. Unless these concerns are addressed the argument falls apart and the plan to conduct a free park play might prove to be a futile effort at attracting people to the theatre and increasing profits.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 467 350
No. of Characters: 2269 1500
No. of Different Words: 208 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.649 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.859 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.63 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 169 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 127 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 88 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 52 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.227 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.633 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.682 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.303 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.303 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.07 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 276, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...vor by another theatre. Taken as a whole , these unstated assumptions render the a...
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Line 1, column 340, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...tions render the argument highly suspect . Indeed, if the assumptions do not hold ...
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Line 1, column 386, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...eed, if the assumptions do not hold true , the argument totally falls apart. Firs...
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Line 2, column 667, Rule ID: BORED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'bored with'?
Suggestion: bored with
... might also be the case that people are bored of the interiors, decoration, or the overa...
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Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... assumptions under the same as well. For instance the increase in profits may not...
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Line 3, column 359, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ame or even decreased this not mentioned in the argument. It might also be the ca...
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Line 3, column 884, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Unless” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...m and may be even use the social media. Unless, the above concerns are addressed relyi...
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Line 4, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t makes a number of unstated assumptions that seriously undermines its validity. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.6327345309 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.9520958084 162% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 11.1786427146 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 28.8173652695 80% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 55.5748502994 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2312.0 2260.96107784 102% => OK
No of words: 467.0 441.139720559 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95074946467 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.56307096286 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70912479875 2.78398813304 97% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 204.123752495 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.45182012848 0.468620217663 96% => OK
syllable_count: 726.3 705.55239521 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.96107784431 141% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.76447105788 103% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 19.7664670659 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7794893698 57.8364921388 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.090909091 119.503703932 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2272727273 23.324526521 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 5.70786347227 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.25449101796 152% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.20758483034 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0985579627144 0.218282227539 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0349410212809 0.0743258471296 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454586719722 0.0701772020484 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0561178621244 0.128457276422 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376055574602 0.0628817314937 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.3799401198 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.3550499002 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.5979740519 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.32208582834 102% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 98.500998004 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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