Public criticism of the government is an important aspect of all nations irrespective of democracy or autocracy. When authorities deny to acknowledge public criticism entire governments are dissolved monarchs are toppled and presidents resign within a night. Unequivocally, active and large public criticism is the key to continuous incremental change for public welfare.
Strong Public criticism by many acts as a sword hanging above any government and persuades the government to provide better governance and improve overall conditions. Public criticism acts as a system of checks balances over the government. General perception of the government and feedback of it's policies reaches to the government which then restructures their policies for benefit of the society else it leads to even more criticism. Kalinga, a developed democracy of the east , recently has started using technology positively to conduct various polls for decision making this has given Kalingan leaders highest approval ratings since ever.
When more and more voices are heard, it is easy to pressurize the government to implement policies favoring the public. This acts as a refreshing pill for the democracy and prevents government from practicing unwarranted power. This is cardinal to any government as it prevents dictatorship either by government or by military coup. Miracles can happen when the people start speaking, instances can be drawn from the Arab Spring where decades old dictatorships were toppled by people thanks to social media providing new platforms to raise the communal voice.
Indus a nation in the west on the contrary suffers from the opposite and can serve as an example of what happens when people do not raise their voices against the government policies. Indus's government has imposed the highest taxes of anywhere in the west, government healthcare and food supply has been substituted by more costly private alternatives , gas costs twice as much anywhere ,and free speech is heavily suppressed. All because people decided to mind their own business a few years back and knelt to growing authoritarianism now they face the most dire consequences. Social scientist are already predicting its demise in a decade or so.
One aspect that often defends against excessive public rage is that the fear of public criticism leads to inability of governments to take strong decisions and pass reforms. What we must understand is that the acceptance of any change that is ultimately aimed at bringing good to the society depends upon the ability of government to tout it to the public. Any reform may be challenged at first but with talks and negotiations, they can get acceptance in the public sphere.
We can definitely say that no form of governance has survived without the will of its people; any act of defiance of public speech has toppled of dictator's and removed governments. The same criticism has evolved the public sphere positively in aspects ranging from healthcare to security and economy, provided a feedback to the authorities, maintained social order, forced governments to retract laws and decisions and is a important social marker of the development of a society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'deny acknowledging'.
Suggestion: deny acknowledging
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Suggestion: ,
...linga, a developed democracy of the east , recently has started using technology p...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'leaders the highest'.
Suggestion: leaders the highest
...decision making this has given Kalingan leaders highest approval ratings since ever. When mo...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Suggestion: ,
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an get acceptance in the public sphere. We can definitely say that no form of go...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, may, so, then, as to, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2695.0 2235.4752809 121% => OK
No of words: 505.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33663366337 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74048574033 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93198301463 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 274.0 215.323595506 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542574257426 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 849.6 704.065955056 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3227703448 60.3974514979 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.75 118.986275619 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45 5.21951772744 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0821717675298 0.243740707755 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0274245623907 0.0831039109588 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0220486547617 0.0758088955206 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0463222184037 0.150359130593 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169721678643 0.0667264976115 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.8420337079 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 145.0 100.480337079 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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