The use of smartphones is decreasing our collective intelligence because we are reliant on the technology not on our own minds. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the cutting edge era, technology made our life much easier than earlier. I is believed that our own intelligence became lesser due to the usage of mobiles as we rely on technical devices instead of own knowledge. I largly agree with this notion due to logical and creative thinking are affected by it.
To commence with, there are some reasons of why exceed in mobile usage could have grave reperassion. The predominant one is electronic devices have direct impact to the young generation especially those kids and children who are using it without parental guidance. Many students, for example, who should focus on their learning tasks, are spending too much time on that devices which provide videos and games. Therefore,useof phones might be harmfull for juveniles growth.
Secondly, youngsters may have inability to think creatively, if they have group discussion on certain topic. This is because they get quick answers from the internet with just a click. Hence, children may lost their chance to focus on their thoughts.
On the contrary, the smartphone provides the inconvenient which improves the public life style Hugly. For example, people who can check all the reviews of restaurants which they intend to have dinner, through information sharing application, so that they could make better choice.
To conclude, although these devices give some advantages to improve life quality However, I believe that collective intelligence is badly affected by it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29787234043 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70507127319 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676595744681 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9982870994 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7692307692 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0769230769 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116652266692 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0377054378646 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538628762942 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0615649083578 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717439499749 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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