It is true that cultural traditions and views are different from each other in every society in the world. In some communities, people give more importance to the views of the older generation, while others have the opposite idea, to them younger should get more value than the elderly people. In the following paragraphs, both ideas will be discussed and finally, my opinion will be given.
To begin with the former idea, first of all in many societies elder people are considered the most powerful element in the community due to their knowledge and experience. For example, when people in society have to face any difficulty senior citizens can help to get rid of this problem by giving suggestions which they gathered from their previous life stages. Moreover, in the job sector, their valuable advice will help us to solve different problems in the easiest way. In addition, after taking birth our parents or the elderly person sacrifice their life to nurturing us and all of their efforts to make us an established person in society. So, we the people should give them the proper respect that they deserve.
Turning to the youth, the young generation plays a vital role to build up the future of the nation. Firstly, young people are highly motivated, they acquire degrees and make jobs opportunities for the youth in the society which is very helpful for the country’s economic growth. Secondly, in terms of technology, youngsters are very keen to learn the latest technology. For example, in Bangladesh, many young people after completing their graduation they start IT farms where they use new technology, and many youths are joined there to learn the use of different devices, as well as they earn money and support their family.
In conclusion, for the prosperity of the nation or community young and old both have equal importance from different perspectives. In my opinion, young and old generations both should have deserved equal value in society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01829268293 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61322285128 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551829268293 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.237342887 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.571428571 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9285714286 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1593018562 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052195988163 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05566667237 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104416704561 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784894694554 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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