You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country.
Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
You do NOT need to write any address.
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Mr. Lionti,
I am writing this letter in regard to express my interest to participate in seminar for High Speed pumps which is being delivered by Sulzer next month.
I am quite excited to be a part of this seminar which is being conducted in Italy in our DREAMLAND office. While figuring out about the session through my manager, I also came to know that you will be coordinator for all the persons participating in the seminar from all our various office branches. I would like you to consider my nomination and provide me details about the agenda for seminar.
It would be appreciated if you could suggest me hotels which are approved as per our company policy in the vicinity of the location and type of accommodation suitable for 2 people. Although, this program is sponsored by native company, I would be interested to know what will be budget required for the complete program and if any other costs to be take into account which will help me approve my budget from the Human Resource department. I would like you to confirm whether this seminar is for 2 days or single day starting from 21st of September, 2021 and time slots in which seminar will be conducted.
Looking forward to hearing back from you.
Your Sincerely,
Andrew.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 540, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'September 2021'.
Suggestion: September 2021
...ays or single day starting from 21st of September, 2021 and time slots in which seminar will be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, while, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71232876712 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57661324261 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602739726027 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.5168977702 44.8134815571 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.666666667 76.5299724578 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 16.8248392259 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275799031369 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124751142581 0.0766984524023 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800576117538 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17096602169 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615739894884 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.