You recently visited a place that had a strong impact on you. Now you want to write to your friend about the place. Write a letter to a friend about the place. In your letter, explain where the place was and how you got there to describe what you saw offer to take your friend there
Dear Anna,
I hope you are doing well. You would be glad to know that recently I visited Spit valley, a popular tourist attraction in Himachal Pradesh which totally changed my perspective towards life.
Last week was quite amazing for me as I was totally free from my office and I decided to spend my free time effectively. It was a five days tour organized by my company, and we went there by cab joined by train. We explore the many astonishing sceneries in Himachal Pradesh.
The tour started from the remotest part of the valley and the view was breathtakingly beautiful. Capped trees present over there look very calm during sunset and sunrise. The most profound activity was due to the Buddhist culture of the place, the Gaza monastery filled with monks who believe to spend a simple and happy life.
I returned from the trip yesterday and desperately waiting to show you the wonders of nature that are still unexplored. As I know your keen inclination towards photography, so I am quite sure that this place has a lot to offer you to satisfy your quench for capturing life into still mode.
Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Yours truly,
Sarah
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, still, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 973.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79310344828 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51875924276 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669950738916 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7046084974 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0833333333 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9166666667 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223090575181 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736803486357 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622263827123 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12035149218 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068939669605 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.