You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain:
1. Why you are selling the television
2. Describe the television
3. Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it
Dear Raj ,
I’m fine and hope the same for you. I’d like to tell you about an exciting offer of a sale of television, which may interest you, as you were looking for a television for your bedroom.
I’ve just got admission into a Delhi University and I'm supposed to join before the end of october. As I’ll be staying in a hostel, which is already equipped with the basic facilities, I’ll no longer need it. I’m willing to sell it at half of market price, since I’m in urgent need of money for my hostel fees.
It’s the latest 32 inches, Sony LED television with in-built features like Amazon prime and Netflix, which when connected with the internet, offers a wide variety of documentaries and movies. It’ll help you in your research work as well, so it’s certainly a good buy for you.
Why don’t you pay a visit to my place and check the Television yourself? I ‘m free on the coming weekend, so you can visit me anytime you wish but do ring me up before coming.
I can’t wait to hear from you.
Yours lovingly
Ishween kaur
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| 2021-09-06 | ishween kaur | 73 | view |
| 2020-03-23 | purinavdeep@gmail.com | 56 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Dear Raj , I’m fine and hope the same for yo...
^^
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Raj , I’m fine and hope the same for you. I’d...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing for a television for your bedroom. I’ve just got admission into a Delhi Uni...
^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... for a television for your bedroom. I’ve just got admission into a Delhi Univ...
^
Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...t admission into a Delhi University and Im supposed to join before the end of octo...
^^
Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eady equipped with the basic facilities, I’ll no longer need it. I’m willing to s...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ent need of money for my hostel fees. It’s the latest 32 inches, Sony LED tele...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...so it’s certainly a good buy for you. Why don’t you pay a visit to my place an...
^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...wish but do ring me up before coming. I can’t wait to hear from you. Your...
^^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... I can’t wait to hear from you. Yours lovingly Ishween kaur
^^^
Line 14, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...it to hear from you. Yours lovingly Ishween kaur
^^^
Line 15, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you. Yours lovingly Ishween kaur
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, may, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61256544503 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36634364543 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.696335078534 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6809108525 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0909090909 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342534568926 0.216113520407 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126805749187 0.0766984524023 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952624481663 0.0603063233224 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181322556315 0.12726935374 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890050132469 0.0580467560999 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.