You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain:
1. Why you are selling the television
2. Describe the television
3. Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it
Dear John,
Hello! i 'm at pink of my health and hope, you'r sailing at same boat. You would be on cloud nine to hear that i have been selected in a renowned transnational accounting firm in Canada, thus i am migrating there in the following month. So, i am selling out my TV as it would not be pragmatically possible to carry it.
As you know that i got an increment in the month of December, so i bought a smart LCD of LG brand from this hike. This LCD is easy to connect with internet through mobile phones and it have high quality of pictures with HD sound.
You already know about my emotionally possession with my articles, but there is no feasible solution other than its sale. So, It would be highly appreciable if you come on 1st April at evening to inspect about this TV.
I am eagerly waiting for your response.
With warm regards,
Navdeep
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
Dear John, Hello! i m at pink of my health and hope, your s...
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Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: you're; you are
...llo! i m at pink of my health and hope, your sailing at same boat. You would be on c...
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Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ational accounting firm in Canada, thus i am migrating there in the following mo...
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Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ting firm in Canada, thus i am migrating there in the following month. So, i am s...
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Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ting there in the following month. So, i am selling out my TV as it would not be...
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Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ssible to carry it. As you know that i got an increment in the month of Decemb...
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Line 5, column 66, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... increment in the month of December, so i bought a smart LCD of LG brand from thi...
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Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...bought a smart LCD of LG brand from this hike. This LCD is easy to connect with ...
^^
Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...CD of LG brand from this hike. This LCD is easy to connect with internet through...
^^
Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...h internet through mobile phones and it have high quality of pictures with HD sound...
^^^^
Line 5, column 217, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nes and it have high quality of pictures with HD sound. You already know about...
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Line 7, column 49, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ady know about my emotionally possession with my articles, but there is no feasib...
^^
Line 7, column 211, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on 1st April at evening to inspect about this TV. I am eagerly waiting for your ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 704.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5395619701 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6875 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.459704081 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2222222222 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141246164472 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562857009102 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038925858577 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920416792882 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290498702199 0.0580467560999 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.