New parents should attend parenting courses to bring up their children well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Completely agree why ?
In recent times, many courses related to parenting have been launched and new parents ought to join such programes, in order to raise their children properly. In my opinion, I completely agree with this view, as both children and parents benefit a lot from these courses.
One point to consider is that parenting courses provide new parents with a great deal of guidance and support in raising their young ones. All the topics related to the child’s early milestones, food and nutrition, and hygiene are included in the classes. New parents benefit from such valuable knowledge provided by experts. In contrast, people who do not attend such courses keep struggling with petty issues of their children, and this feeling of stress often extends to other aspects of life such as work, which in long run adversely affects the parent's ability to groom their children.
Another point to consider is that challenges involved in bringing up children are greatly reduced through child psychology understood during parenting sessions. For instance, many children often suffer from behaviour problems such as aggression, disobedience, hyperactivity, and impulsivity. Discussing these issues with qualified life coaches provides an insight into the reasons which may be causing this as well as the solutions, the parents ought to implement to bring up a well mannered and disciplined child.
In conclusion, parenting is considered as one of the difficult jobs, especially for first-time parents who lack experience and skills in dealing with child problems. Therefore, specialized parenting classes go a long way in making parents competent enough to raise their children in a better way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 550, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parents'' or 'parent's'?
Suggestion: parents'; parent's
...which in long run adversely affects the parents ability to groom their children. Anot...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35849056604 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7666734578 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596226415094 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9176940783 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.090909091 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351489061044 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132546879725 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654247747889 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218780767277 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484326300019 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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