people have a divergent outlooks toward that the volunteer clubs only help to their own nation masses,while other controvert that the charity organizations offer aid to those individuals who suffered to scarcity of food and necessary things.
to commence with,plethora of volunteer clubs help to their countrymen to put it in this way, that as a in there own country a plenty of folks are suffering from food,shelter which are provided by their country charity organizations . if they work on their own society then the country poverty is seems a downward trend so these help to country economics.
on the other hand,if the people who doing unpaid work if they provide aid to all the needy people then the nobody will sleep hungry moreover no one can die with some small disease owing to,they prevent by taking some medical treatment.for instant,the biggest charity organisation called Khalsa aid which is started by Ravi singh who is from Punjab,India and nowadays they help to all the countries who want to need. the Khalsa aid team always work day and night they visit those places in which people requiired help .
in my point of view,the latter statement is good if the organisations work for all the nations then the poverty as well as death rate will decreased .
- Some people say that sports play an important role in society Others however think that it is nothing more than a leisure activity Discuss both views and give your own opinion 81
- Many people think that some individuals are naturally good leader Others think that people can learn leadership skills Discuss both views 56
- some people believe charity organization should only offer help to people of their own countries Other claim that these organizations should give aid to people in great need wherever they live Discuss both opinions and tell which side do you agree 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, then, well, while, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96261682243 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72330346183 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588785046729 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.576854576 49.4020404114 214% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 177.0 106.682146367 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.6666666667 20.7667163134 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315962889088 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152964539181 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741903910777 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169397721436 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0984967331608 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.0946893788 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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