Childrens are the backbone of the future of any nation. There are disputed opinion regarding the decision for them; where, although a group of thinker opine that it will be benefical to take some personal decisons on their own, few also argue that it may diminish their thinker and become narrow minded. Both the sides have their own discussions. Therefore, before commenting on my opinion both of them are explained in ensuing paragraphs.
Out of all the argument behind freedom of children for their personal choice the first one is that development of children. Ealier stage of life is not only golden age, aut also considered as a moulded age. If one can success to find what is perfect for them or what is unnecessary, they will definately become self-confident latter in life. Moreover, their reliability to accept ready-made conclusion from either teachers or parents would also decrease. As a result. child can become more creative and able to think outside the box. All the time they have desire that someone find the way of their problem. Eventually, by turning in the age when all supports are taken out, they have a felling of loneliness, monotony, tiredness and not any opportunities of success.
However, opponents of this view counter claim that guardian's advice to the childeren are essential. Some have not an enhanced brain to take proper decesion. They can prefer either wrong or inappropriate way if make them alone. The effort toward wrong direction also very dangerous in the upbringing of children. To illustrate, according to scientific study 67% of school child opted for unethical activities when they have given several option. Apart from that another detrimental thing is maturity may be require to a certain extent in order to select a right place. Only expirenced candidates acquire such a situation except some inborn gifted people.
To sum up and give my opinion, nonetheless, the dependency and creativity of children are developed by some libery on choice, it will found terribal for underaged public who unaware about the chance they have. If asked, I would say that with a close monitoring and mentoring, selection on daily things to the children can be a wise understanding.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 455, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...eachers or parents would also decrease. As a result. child can become more creativ...
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Line 2, column 468, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Child
...rents would also decrease. As a result. child can become more creative and able to th...
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Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'guardians'' or 'guardian's'?
Suggestion: guardians'; guardian's
...ponents of this view counter claim that guardians advice to the childeren are essential. ...
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Line 3, column 429, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun option seems to be countable; consider using: 'several options'.
Suggestion: several options
...ethical activities when they have given several option. Apart from that another detrimental th...
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Line 4, column 347, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e children can be a wise understanding.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, regarding, so, therefore, apart from, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05191256831 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76222481574 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606557377049 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.4919834204 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0476190476 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4285714286 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148329491216 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452135774937 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453166378946 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877744777569 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310170089805 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 455, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...eachers or parents would also decrease. As a result. child can become more creativ...
^^
Line 2, column 468, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Child
...rents would also decrease. As a result. child can become more creative and able to th...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'guardians'' or 'guardian's'?
Suggestion: guardians'; guardian's
...ponents of this view counter claim that guardians advice to the childeren are essential. ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 429, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun option seems to be countable; consider using: 'several options'.
Suggestion: several options
...ethical activities when they have given several option. Apart from that another detrimental th...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 347, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e children can be a wise understanding.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, regarding, so, therefore, apart from, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05191256831 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76222481574 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606557377049 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.4919834204 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0476190476 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4285714286 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148329491216 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452135774937 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453166378946 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877744777569 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310170089805 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.