In the recent era, the job sectors are changing dynamically, in this situation consider a section as a future career is not a simple task. Therefore, before choosing, a man has to think about this sector from different perspectives such as passion, future development, and so on. In this case, different people have different opinions, some say that adolescents should have the independence to select their own career and others have dissent ideas and they believe they should be practical and think carefully before picking a path. In the following paragraphs, both views will be discussed and finally, my opinion will be given.
On the one hand, due to the change in socializing, today youth can choose their own the forthcoming career which is seen all around the world. According to the research, almost 87 percent of the young people select their future path to perform well as a professional. It helps them to be motivated and dedicated to the work. Moreover, Being focus on the work, they can give more effort, for example, if a student is interested and passionate about Artificial Intelligence, by doing research he can make a new solution that will enhance the comfort of human life. In addition, enthusiastic employees increase the productivity of the company which brings more revenue and also create opportunity for the people to gain a new position.
On the other hand, young lads and ladies should take into consideration the practicality of the job sector. To illustrate, before entering the job they should have done some research on the oncoming field of this sector. For instance, in the first decade of the twenty-first century, in Bangladesh, the communication sector was a growing sector, therefore many people had chosen this sector, as a result, in contemporary times, automation makes many people unemployed. Now they are struggling a lot in the job sector and switching their career.
In conclusion, to sum up all the points above, in my opinion, guardians should let the young generation choose their own path but with their experience, they should help them by giving suggestions to remain on the right track.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06497175141 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86053321256 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564971751412 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 4.76152304609 378% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.7588923694 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.071428571 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.9285714286 7.06120827912 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397083086268 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119742728478 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694525571946 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224235738916 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668510386032 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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