In modern epoch, most of individuals work
from home in respect of office.It is argued that few masses believe that it is mostly benefits for employees and their families, however others think that it is burden for family members. This essay will explain both views. I think that former point of view is better.
To commence with, the number of workers increase who do their job from home due to ample of reasons. First, employees complete their work according to their time. To explain it, employees have a bunch of time in home rather than in office. They also complete their work In a better way owing to no restriction and order from employer. They do their job without any stress and burden. Moreover, work from home is not only better for workers, but also better for their family. If employees do work from home, then workers also solve their family issues. If employees working in the house, then the number of leaves also reduced. According to Oxford University survey, 2018 in Vietnam. This survey reveals the data that was per- centum of leaves which was taken by employees annually was declined
from 23% to 9% due to working from home. Thus, work from home is better for employees and their family members.
Never the less, although there are plethora of benefits for employees, yet do not overlook its demerits. First of all, single room is always occupied by employee due to their work. To elaborate it, if workers want to complete their task in particular time in their home, then one room is required without any disturbance. When it comes to family disturbance, it is not possible for employees in case of completing the task. Furthermore, workers do not give their 100% in lack of furniture and internet facility. Without internet, it is not possible for employees to do work from home. To epitome, according to BBC
research, 20% of employees left their job because they do not complete their task due to lack of internet facility in their home. Therefore, work from home is also stress for employees and for their family members.
In conclusion, eventhough there are bunch of advantages of work from home, yet do not forgotten it's lawful affects. According to me, working in house is more beneficial for employees rather than in workplace.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the individuals') or simply say ''most individuals''.
Suggestion: most of the individuals; most individuals
In modern epoch, most of individuals work from home in respect of office.I...
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Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n modern epoch, most of individuals work from home in respect of office.It is arg...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...s work from home in respect of office.It is argued that few masses believe that ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...taken by employees annually was declined from 23% to 9% due to working from home....
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[1]
Message: The adverb 'Never' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
... employees and their family members. Never the less, although there are plethora o...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... from home. To epitome, according to BBC research, 20% of employees left their jo...
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Line 8, column 165, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'stressed'.
Suggestion: stressed
...home. Therefore, work from home is also stress for employees and for their family memb...
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Line 10, column 37, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'bunches'?
Suggestion: bunches
... In conclusion, eventhough there are bunch of advantages of work from home, yet do...
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Line 10, column 117, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...et do not forgotten its lawful affects. According to me, working in house is more beneficial fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, i think, in conclusion, in particular, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1908.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90488431877 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46672263559 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.449871465296 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1692810454 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2083333333 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229851187278 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857513940141 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487456275968 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13601315928 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449591547047 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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