People are consuming more and more sugar-based drinks. Why? What can be done to reduce sugary drink consumption?
Nowadays, a large number of people tend to consume more and more drinks conclude extremely large sugar. This essay will provide suitable reasons and have some keys to prevent this tendency.
Of course, Sugar plays an important role in staying healthy. It helps people keep awake and focus on working for a long period. However, If people eat a high amount of sugar to work every day, they might have addicted and relied on it which leads them to consume more products that contain lots of sugar, despite knowing the bad impacts on this habit. Moreover, drink companies want to rise their profits so factories have used sugar chemicals in the process of making soft drinks which reduces the cost of buying ingredients. As a result, soft drinks are cheaper than a bottle of water at the prices. This interests consumers to spend more money on buying these high sugar drinks instead of purchasing other sorts of drinks. Another reason is that many social media or influencers are convincing and advertising viewers to buy sugar products which create an upward trend, people begin to buy mass products which consist of a high amount of sugar inside them.
Fortunately, there are some notable solutions to decline this issue. Firstly, individuals need to aware that eating lots of sugar will bring negative consequences to their physical health such as obesity, diabetes, and so on. Therefore, taking some hard aerobics or exercises will remove sugar effectively. Moreover, people can change some sweat drinks with healthier drinks like drinking freshwater, smoothies which help people solve the thirsty problem but it is still good for their body.
In conclusion, the high demand for sugary drinks results from sugar addiction. I believe that both individuals and governments to take some effective measures will decline the consumers’ sugar intake
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
Nowadays, a large number of people tend to consume more and more dr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, in conclusion, of course, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13245033113 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47945817057 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619205298013 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.484176742 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.333333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320824176868 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105290001463 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922293697931 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198299576634 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374845364911 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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