A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college
According to author, a nation should require national curriculum should be studied by students until they start pursuing further education after schools. I agree with the author because to integrate the students it is crucial for nation.
Firstly, national curriculum is helpful for students to make them understand the patriotism about their country. If they will study it in their early school period, then they will learn the discipline and moral principles to comply in their lives. It will help to reduce crimes and flagrant behaviour in the society and hence countries. Subsequently, it will play an important to build a developed nation morally. Hence, government should impose a rule to make students teach about their national curriculum in the syllabus until school level.
Secondly, national curriculum should not be studied by students when they enter college as they should already study it in school period. They should study in their specialization as it is now foremost part of their life. Because, in their specialization, syllabus will become very vast and diversified.
Thirdly, Even if they won't study national curriculum in their colleges, they should not forget it as it is crucial part as a citizen of a particular nation. Because, nowadays, after learning about it, still, people becoming felons and admitiing crimes.
In sum, national curriculum should be prioritized in schools by governments but not in college
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... becoming felons and admitiing crimes. In sum, national curriculum should be pr...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 2235.4752809 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 228.0 442.535393258 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36842105263 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78537434635 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 215.323595506 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 704.065955056 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8025583089 60.3974514979 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.1538461538 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5384615385 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 5.21951772744 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.496353032204 0.243740707755 204% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188162373878 0.0831039109588 226% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156157036861 0.0758088955206 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.314550650349 0.150359130593 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704514094677 0.0667264976115 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 100.480337079 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... becoming felons and admitiing crimes. In sum, national curriculum should be pr...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 2235.4752809 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 228.0 442.535393258 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36842105263 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78537434635 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 215.323595506 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 704.065955056 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8025583089 60.3974514979 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.1538461538 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5384615385 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 5.21951772744 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.496353032204 0.243740707755 204% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188162373878 0.0831039109588 226% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156157036861 0.0758088955206 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.314550650349 0.150359130593 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704514094677 0.0667264976115 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 100.480337079 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.