Governments should ban smoking in public places , even though this would restrict some other people's freedom . Do you agree or disagree?
Smoking is an evil and it is crippling our society at a very rapid rate. Hence the worst part is we are not doing enough to halt this crisis and in order to prevent society from this disaster the government needs to take serious steps. However, some people comprehend that it would be an unwise decision if the administration makes any rule to ban smoking. I entirely disagree with this argument, and in my view strong laws should be enforced on smoking openly.
There are Nemours compelling reasons to support the argument why smoking in public places should be prohibited quickly. First negative is attributed to the health effects of smoking in the public area as the trend of smoking publicly does not only have lethal impacts on the health of smokers but also non smokers suffer from various life taking diseases such as blood cancer, failure of respiratory system. Latest pieces of research papers suggest that cases of lung cancer are increasing invariably these days. Suffering of the environment from smoking is also a major concern as toxic gases are exhibited, while cigarettes are lighted and these glasses make it impossible for one to breathe in fresh air. Moreover, children can quickly adopt this doomed habit if anyone smokes in front of them as children have vulnerable minds and they always learn from their surroundings and elders. Hence, if smoking in public is restricted then very few children will adopt this addictive habit. Unquestionably, while any pregnant mother smokes, it could have life threatening effects on the health of the developing baby in her embryo. According to the World Health Organization, chances of mortality among the new born babies are more if their mother smokes three times per day during the pregnancy.
To conclude, although some individuals opine that smoking in public is legal as they are law abiding citizens, nothing is more important than the safety of the public and environment. Therefore, smoking in open areas should be banned permanently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, as to, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07228915663 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62041268431 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623493975904 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5741792261 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.285714286 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256173512032 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826637357407 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556401586913 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175980599901 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359916232192 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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