Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There are split opinions regarding important school subjects. some individuals state that Historical subjects are more crucial, while; another group of thinkers support in 20th century science and technology subject are more valuable. However, both has it’s own pros and cons. Therefore, before commenting on my decision, both the opinion would be discussed further.
Examining the former opinion, the primary argument the supporters would put forward is history subject offers knowledge regarding the evolution of mankind. this is because in terms of societies culture are most important part in our life and our nation done many more evolution. For instance independent evolution in front of british. The main contribution of the freedom fighters and their ideas are also inspired for 20th century generation. In addition, they also believe that history provides us our culture. The reason is in this recent time if know about your culture in only source is history and rise our culture. this knowledge helped us to avoid mistakes in the future.
On the contrary, the latter view suggest that science and technology are most significant subject. because In current education system, technology is important for a student's future. For example, in this pandemic technology play essential role do all work online even academic educate online from website and people do worked at home and all this doing for information technology engineering. Physics, Chemistry, math, biology for the base of several subjects for engineering students so science and technology crucial for academic career.
To conclude, and give my opinion, I would say that in this century science based subjects are essential and other academically important once; information about out culture and origin is equally vital to some extent.
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- Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects Other people think that in today s world subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 78
- Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects Other people think that in today s world subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 78
- Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects other people think in today s world subjects like science and technology are more important than history Discuss both the views and give your opinion 93
- Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects Other people think that in today s world subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55516014235 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69093274413 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590747330961 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.4998511903 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5625 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306857003634 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908190412469 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648188540788 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18396803296 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583019624659 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.