Many people are working longer hours. Why is this happening? What problems can this cause to people?
In this day and age, there has been a hot debate regarding the working hours of workers. They have a tendency to overwork. There is a wide range of compelling reasons to explain this trend. Moreover, it also has a considerable bearing on people’s life.
On the one hand, the first reason to explain why the phenomenon is increasingly ubiquitous in the community. One evident strength is that it arises out of requirements of daily life. In this fast-paced world, people are forced to work overtime to be able to earn lucrative incomes to live up to the fullest of their daily demands. Especially for the young, they usually work additional times to serve for their personal preferences which are so luxurious as going shopping or buying car… Therefore, they are always willing to trade off a high salary with their beloved ones. Furthermore, people who are breadwinners of their house, they usually tend to work day and night to alleviate the financial burden for their families, specifically their parents. In fact, they will be likely to help their parents to raise other family members who are unable to work such as younger sisters or brothers, and pay other living expenses.
On the other hand, this trend also leaves some significant influences on people’s mental and physical health. First of all, people can contract some serious diseases if they work too much. According to the current information from the government, the number of people who catch obesity and heart disease increasing sharply because of overwork, even leading to death. Besides, it also causes detrimental adverse impacts on their psychological health and reduction in productiveness. Due to the fact that people easily suffer from mental health issues such as autism, anxiety disorder, or stress. This also gives rise to the decrease of the efficiency in their work to a certain extent.
In conclusion, there are a host of underlying reasons to be attributable to this matter. Additionally, working longer times is likely to result in many health problems for people and create a culture of overwork in a society
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 596, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...their beloved ones. Furthermore, people who are breadwinners of their house, they usual...
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Line 7, column 28, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'hosts'?
Suggestion: hosts
...n extent. In conclusion, there are a host of underlying reasons to be attributabl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, in conclusion, in fact, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1759.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05459770115 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77450378467 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568965517241 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7380406148 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7222222222 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30403438946 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911408151867 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651348929638 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204275120972 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559133332895 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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