Balancing work with life is pretty much challenging to everyone in today's world. It is a fact, people are overloaded with work to achieve their goals. Unfortunately, most of them couldn't able to give time to their personal life for a longer period and some until their retirement, but there are some who make it possible. Notting is impossible if people figure it out to balance them according to the plan.
Demanding of the situation employers are forcing themselves to work more than they required, either for more pay or pressure from the organization, which led them to forget their family life and get exhausted by the end of the day. There are other reasons, such as falling in the trap of highly paid companies, in that case, employers barely get public holidays or leaves to visit their own. In other words desperate people who needs the job, they don't go with the reviews, benefits, and location of the organization before they opt, such as timings, project, public holidays, annual leaves, etc. instead, they go with high salary and get shoved with a long period of contract.
Others are more into benefits, location, and choosing comfortable projects which makes them stress less and have a balanced life. They make time for their loved ones according to their own schedule. Thinking about the high salary among these people, they are intelligent to choose high paid organizations including with all the benefits they needed.
Finally, to conclude, one must be careful enough to choose the right career opportunity to get satisfied at work and in family life.
- You and your family have just rented an apartment and one or two problems occurred Write a letter to the landlord In your letter introduce yourself describe the problems what you would like him her to do 61
- Smoking is a major cause of serious illness and death throughout the world today In the interest of the public health governments should ban cigarettes and other tobacco products Do you agree or disagree 61
- You work a part time job in a company and the company posted an advert seeking a person for a full time position Write a letter to your manager requesting to apply for the advertised position In your letter say Why do you want to apply What are your futur 61
- People aim to achieve the balance between their work and lives but few people achieve it What are the causes of the problems How to overcome it 73
- You and your friend are planning a picnic in the countryside Write Which arrangements have you already done Other activities that can be done How can your friend help with the arrangements 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...eir goals. Unfortunately, most of them couldnt able to give time to their personal lif...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...esperate people who needs the job, they dont go with the reviews, benefits, and loca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96226415094 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55665877543 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592452830189 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6658095922 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.583333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143490043803 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678712319961 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827441879656 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894944774939 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080631957789 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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