when it comes to the topic of environment, it remembers us of global warming. we know very well how global warming affects badly to the environment. for this everyone should take some steps to make this world beautiful and clean environment. climate change is one of the most dangerous problem for the world as well as people's health. damage to climate means to give invitation to the disease. so we will have to make sure that we always try to do something good for this nature. our government has taken many steps for the betterment of the nature but it will never work without society's contribution.
many people believe that nothing will change by one person but I would like to say that every big decision comes from that one mind only. if aryabhatt never think about zero, maybe we never find that truth. so for the big change, someone has to come out and start doing something. if you can not start on your own then you should help people who are already doing something to the cleanliness of this earth. government announced many projects for make this country white and shine. many big companies also taking part to this initiative, there are so many people who works with their heart but it doesn't mean that a single person cannot do anything. there are many people who started their work alone and now they are working NGOs and doing work very well.
do you ever think that environment gives us so many things and what we are giving to this nature? if not, than you must give a thought to it. it gives us lives we can say. we have food flowers water and many more things from this nature so we should be careful for it's safety and we should not try to harm it. if someone is trying, we must stop them for doing bad to this environment. it is our duty also. for this, first we should keep our houses clean than only we can move further. if we can do this then we can make this earth clean as well.
from the discussed topic, I think this is not right that only government and big companies can make this happen but anyone from us like a normal person can also do this if he/she wants to. It can start from anywhere, anytime and by anyone. there is no need for taking any type of help or money.
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- levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world what are the reasons for this and suggest some solutions 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, then, well, as to, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 24.0651302605 278% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1801.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 412.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3713592233 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16590142764 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480582524272 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0408990908 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.04 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.48 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213105418829 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663967043841 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615279198306 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146536888739 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517885872972 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 12.4159519038 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.19 8.58950901804 72% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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