What are the advantages and the disadvantages of being over-competitive to individuals and society?
Recently, the phenomenon of being over-competitive and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of competitions is highly beneficial, such issue is regarding thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that people can be a plus and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, anticipating in competitions can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that the merits of increasing demands for competing as well as different situations are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, I performed an academic experimnet which discovered remarkable opportunities. Thus, the beneficial ramifications of both public situations and getting the best position apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of science, competing to other people might increase the consequences of being satisfied. Moreover, the fundamental aspects of desirable conditions could relate to this reality that the demerits of being confident pertain to the obtaining the best result. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted the downside of enhancing chances is correlated negatively with being successful. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of a new attitude.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits attempting to win a competition far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of more attempting prove the significance of getting a good result but also pinpoint the possible implications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69649805447 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36755086002 2.71678728327 124% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657587548638 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2325070499 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.25397266985 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184576632895 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555520034949 0.0925447433944 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464281564731 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953759226478 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036220654716 0.0609392437508 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 11.5310837438 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.7 8.32886699507 128% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 55.0591133005 178% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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