Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the effects on society and family life?
Nowadays, many people do not want to have children early when they are young. There are several reasons for this trend, and it can negatively affect society and family life.
There are two important reasons why many people decide to have children later in their married life. To begin with, giving birth later allows them to have more opportunities to enjoy a free life. In other words, when they do not have children, they may have more time to go wherever they want and pursue their hobbies. Another reason for delaying having a baby can be the fact that young people want to focus on developing their own career. Because taking care of children can be expensive, they may want to have a stable job and a salary enough to raise their children. Therefore, they tend to wait until they have earned more money to embark on parenthood.
However, delaying having a child can have adverse/detrimental impacts on society as well as family life. Firstly, the generation gap can widen when people give birth later. They may find it difficult to understand and communicate with their children, which can adversely affect their relationship in the long run. In addition, pregnancy in old age often entails potential health risks for both the mother and the baby. For instance, many research in the world show that women getting pregnant after the age of 35 can face the risk of miscarriage. Finally, on a society level, the reduction in birth rates can result in an aging population. This might lead to a shortage of workforce which can have an adverse effect on the development of the national economy.
In conclusion, people these days have many reasons to delay having babies and this tendency could result in negative influences on both society and family life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 434, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun research seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much research', 'a good deal of research'.
Suggestion: much research; a good deal of research
... the mother and the baby. For instance, many research in the world show that women getting pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86710963455 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54462929393 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538205980066 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.4650671211 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.5625 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8125 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1875 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345087417662 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124896807456 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919078566606 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227857737184 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640339261996 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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