Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think that zoos are both entertaining and ecologically important. Discuss both views
Nowadays, it is believed that keeping wild animals in zoos, particularly in cage is faulty, whereas other people think that bring many benefits for amusing and ecologically essentials. In this essays, I will discuss and clarify according to environment, ecological balance.
Keeping creatures which is rare animals in zoos may protect them from hunting. For example, many creatures such as elephants, rhinoceroses, etc, they are always targets of hunters for valuable horns. Besides that, some animals are usually prey for predators, so that keeping herbivores in cage will preserve them from extinction. However, costs of taking care of wild animals are expensive, they have a lot of profits from visitors. The government can use that income for investing to preserve rare animals from hunters. Therefore, keeping creatures in zoos can be seen as a right policy.
On the other hand, when we keep the wild animals in cage, they will may have some problems about mentality. As a human, they also have feelings and emotional individuals, they don’t feel comfortable and free as prisoner in jail. The government can invest for building ecological forest and let animals have freedom. In addition, we should make services for visitors to come through forest by jeep. In this way, the authorities do not just protect rare animals, but they also have income for state budget. Briefly, we have many solutions for preserving but not keeping animals in zoos.
In conclusion, keeping animals in zoos is not certainly wrong, because that brings many benefits for ecological. Although, we would solve problems by positive ways which do not harm wild animals and lose balance ecology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, briefly, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, whereas, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21851851852 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67593297449 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1085059299 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.0625 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19700982767 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737725497691 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646217910914 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139807284425 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474479251893 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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