Life has become much more stressful compared to our parent’s generation. As a result, stress-related illnesses are increasing around the world. Why is stress such widespread in the modern world and what do you think can be done to overcome the problems caused by stress?
The world is in now fast pace of the life and the life is more stressful compared to our parent's generation. I opine that there are such problem which are escalated in the world and for that problems, we have various solutions. This essay will scrutinize the aspects of the quandary in the ensuing paragraphs.
To begin with, the diseases related to stress are at alarming rate on the globe because with the advent of new technologies, citizens want to become successful in one attempt only, like to become rich and take shortcut for the work so peoples take stress of their work and families and these impact on their brain. Furthermore, the proponents take debt from the lenders and bank institutional in order to fulfill their dream of the families, but at same time they do not have the money to repay to borrowers and they take stress on their mind for the repayment whereas at our parent's generation they does not take any stress as their quotidian lifestyle is simple. For example, a survey of 2020 elucidates that 35% of the population in the USA are suffering from high blood-pressure for taking the heavy loan from bank, to play games in casinos.
Secondly, I vehemently believe that, the government arrange the seminars in order to netizens who have stress in their life will go there and try to curb out of there problems. Similarly, the denizens have go to doctor which is specialize in the field of the stressful related illness for the proper medication. To exemplify, the report of 2019 illustrates that 65% of the younger who have stress diseases, go to doctor for the treatment for outcome of the disease.
In conclusion, from an overall perspective without a shadow of a doubt, I am inclined to believe that though there are various stress illness are on proliferated stage but there are proper solutions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, whereas, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79179810726 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66642326242 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523659305994 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.0219248151 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.9 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.7 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231911415571 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0997711291398 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877058687217 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145530368579 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674504906512 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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