Prison is the best punishment for criminals. Do you agree or disagree?
As the old adage goes," Men are distributed not by the things, but by the view in which they take them off." The contentious issue at present is about the Prison is the best punishment for criminals or not. People espouse the notion that behind the bars is the way for the criminals. I opine that Prison is not beneficial for criminals who have committed small crimes. These essay will scrutinize both the aspects of quandary in the ensuing paragraphs.
To begin with, proponents think that the culprit should be in jail because the law made by the government is not proper and the citizens know how to loopholes the system. Furthermore, if the criminal is kept in the cell as they will miss their kith and kin so they will not try to repeat the crime. For example, the survey of 2020 illustrates that 35% of the population in Africa have reduced their robbery after being kept in the custody of police for 20 years.
Secondly, I vehemently believe that the offenders like those who do not follow the traffic rules had not to be put in lock-up rather than they had to pay a fine. Similarly, if the thief goes to jails there are several prisoners who had done big crimes like acid throwing and murders and the thief will meet them so that whenever he is released he will aggrandize his crime. To exemplify, the report of 2021 illustrates that 50% of citizens who had done robbery in London are not kept in imprisonment, instead they are sent to rehabilitation centres.
In conclusion, from an overall perspective without a shadow of a doubt, I am inclined to believe that the prisons are not beneficial for all the criminals and there are myriads of ways to punish them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , &apos
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on are not kept in imprisonment, instead they are sent to rehabilitation centres....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63666666667 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60548779822 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563333333333 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.3288844692 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.454545455 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2727272727 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203698668085 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740780857965 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749109331146 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131111495503 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08312415393 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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