Many people believe that today there is a general increase in anti-social behavior and lack of respect for others.
What might have caused this situation?
How to improve it?
Nowadays, there is an increase in anti-social behavior and lack of respect for others due to the advent of modern technology and the prosperous culture of the society. I opine that there are myriad reasons for this issue. This essay will scrutinize the aspect of the quandary in the ensuing paragraph.
To begin with, the situation of anti-social behavior is because there are no proper rules made by governments and proponents think that the work they are doing like misbehavior with females and using abusive language in the society is good for their quotidian lifestyle. Furthermore, the citizens also don't give respect, especially teenagers, to the elder in the society as they do not have life skills which are to be given by their parents while they believe that all the people in the country are equal in age. For example, the report of 2018 illustrates that 65% of adolescents started robbery for the need of money whereas their parents are not knowing about their children's handiwork.
Secondly, I vehemently believe that the government and NGOs have to start the counseling programs so that the denizens will attend the seminars and try to improve themselves in their life. Similarly, the education sector like schools and coaching classes have to implement the social life subject such as how to be polite with old age netizens so that the young ones will understand the conical of the anti-social behavior. To exemplify, the survey of 2021 elucidates that the French government has passed a law to provide education about the awareness of bad habits such as smoking and Alcohol at age of 7 only.
In Conclusion, from an overall perspective without a shadow of a doubt, I am inclined to believe that the anti-social behavior and lack of respect is not beneficial for the society and there should be the proper method to plummet its growth among the population of the world.
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| 2021-08-08 | VINITA SHARMA | 74 | view |
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 303, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...festyle. Furthermore, the citizens also dont give respect, especially teenagers, to ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 643, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...the need of money whereas their parents are not knowing about their childrens handiwork. Sec...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 106, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...doubt, I am inclined to believe that the anti-social behavior and lack of respect...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94357366771 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68093815087 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554858934169 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.8421484711 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.7 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.9 20.7667163134 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289942739649 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104214333292 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719980728468 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171411443931 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540302751912 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 303, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...festyle. Furthermore, the citizens also dont give respect, especially teenagers, to ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 643, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...the need of money whereas their parents are not knowing about their childrens handiwork. Sec...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 106, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...doubt, I am inclined to believe that the anti-social behavior and lack of respect...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94357366771 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68093815087 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554858934169 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.8421484711 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.7 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.9 20.7667163134 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289942739649 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104214333292 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719980728468 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171411443931 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540302751912 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.