The table below shows the number of visitors in the UK and their average spending from 2003 to 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
A quick glance at the given diagram reveals the figure for visitors in England in terms of their common expenses between 2003 and 2008.
It is clear that while almost all categories had a steady rise at the end of the period, the Average nights per Visit moderately gone down. Moreover, the spending of travelers to the UK was substantially surged after the middle year.
When we looking at the number of visitors, it is well-documented that in 2003 this category had about 24.715 million then it significant rise over time and reach its peak in 2008 with 31.888 passengers. In addition, The expense of foreigners was a noticeable increase, initially, the amount of money was $11.855 but it substantially surged to $16.002 in 2006 also went down a little bit and climbed to the highest rank in 2008 with $16.323.
Furthermore, the average spend per Visit witnessed a fluctuation, while in 2003 it stood at a markedly level, this section slightly decreased in 2004 but went up to $511 at the end of the period. According to the table, the average night per visit only had a slow decline over time, with the highest number in the first two years then gradually went down to 7,7 nights in 2008.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 372, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...urged to 6.002 in 2006 also went down a little bit and climbed to the highest rank in 2008...
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Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('markedly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('level') instead of another adjective.
... fluctuation, while in 2003 it stood at a markedly level, this section slightly decreased in 200...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, then, well, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67142857143 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62522647765 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580952380952 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.8722635637 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.142857143 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 22.9334400587 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1428571429 5.23603664747 232% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128171385952 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623651498917 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297234054877 0.0843802449381 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0830831677769 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230629694756 0.0819641961636 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.