The chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013

Essay topics:

The chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

The bar chart reveals information on the number of times people in America consume processed food from 2003 to 2013.
Overall, it can be seen clearly that the data of people enjoying fast food once a week and once a month accounted for the highest proportion of the population. An upward trend was recorded in the percentage of people eating ready meals one or twice a month and few times a year whereas the remaining categories witnessed a contrast movement.
When looking at the percentage of people consuming fast food everyday, the chart showed that the figure reached a peak in 2006 at 20%, then fell marginally to nearly 15% in 2013. The similar trend was witnessed in the next category with the highest point at more than 30%. Nevertheless, the proportion of people eating fast food once or twice a year started at exactly 30%, then a decrease of 10% was recorded, which was followed by a recovery of approximately 15% in 2013, accurately equal to that of once a week.
Moving on to analyse the remaining part of the chart, the percentage of people enjoying processed meals a few times a year grew minimally by 5% and stabilized at 15% in 2006 and 2013. However, the statistic regarding people consuming ready meals everyday and who never tasted those dropped slightly from 2003 to 2006 and remained constant during the last 7 years of the given period.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 261, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing ready meals one or twice a month and few times a year whereas the remaining c...
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Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ercentage of people consuming fast food everyday, the chart showed that the figure reach...
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Line 4, column 246, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... regarding people consuming ready meals everyday and who never tasted those dropped slig...
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Line 4, column 338, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... from 2003 to 2006 and remained constant during the last 7 years of the given per...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, nevertheless, regarding, then, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1128.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73949579832 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60365916129 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525210084034 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 338.4 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.6978260329 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.0 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.75 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218275631855 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105056571804 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740743510555 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148790228646 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550494459217 0.056905535591 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 11.3001002004 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 261, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing ready meals one or twice a month and few times a year whereas the remaining c...
^^
Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ercentage of people consuming fast food everyday, the chart showed that the figure reach...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 246, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... regarding people consuming ready meals everyday and who never tasted those dropped slig...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 338, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... from 2003 to 2006 and remained constant during the last 7 years of the given per...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, nevertheless, regarding, then, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1128.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73949579832 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60365916129 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525210084034 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 338.4 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.6978260329 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.0 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.75 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218275631855 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105056571804 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740743510555 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148790228646 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550494459217 0.056905535591 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 11.3001002004 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.