The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
The chart visualises how often the us citizens be at fast-food restaurants in the year 2003,2006 and 2013.
From 2003 to 2006 the percentage of people who have never eaten at a fast food restaurant has fallen by 1% but on the other hand during the some period the number of clients who eat fast food everyday has also fallen to about 3% of population.since 2006 , no other changes have occurred in these segments of the chart.
The major changes can be seen in the groups, who eat in a fast-food restaurant on a weekly basis and in the groups in which people visit the fast -food restaurants once or twice a month or once a few months. While in 2006 most of the us citizens ate at such facilities at least once a week, in 2013 most of the population did so only once or twice a month. It's clear that the fast-food restaurants were most popular in 2006 and least popular in 2013.however the number of people who eat in such restaurants only a few times every year didn't change.
As a whole, with the exception of people who rarely or never eat fast food and in addition, the small part of the population who eat every day, the peak of going to fast-food restaurants was reached in 2006 in contrast with 2013 when most of the population spent time in them only once or twice a month.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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The chart visualises how often the us citizens be at fast-foo...
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... by 1% but on the other hand during the some period the number of clients who eat fa...
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...the number of clients who eat fast food everyday has also fallen to about 3% of populati...
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...len to about 3% of population.since 2006 , no other changes have occurred in these...
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... -food restaurants once or twice a month or once a few months. While in 2006 most...
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...restaurants only a few times every year didnt change. As a whole, with the excepti...
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...ly a few times every year didnt change. As a whole, with the exception of people...
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...every year didnt change. As a whole, with the exception of people who rarely or never eat fast foo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, while, at least, in addition, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1044.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50748093021 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 308.7 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.4782104044 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 174.0 106.682146367 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.0 20.7667163134 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 7.06120827912 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293617445565 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179243447379 0.084324248473 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782197677094 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214476043145 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643037436755 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.26 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.54 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 78.4519038076 33% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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