Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.Which viewpoint do you agree with?

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Transition Words or Phrases used:

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 41.998997996 12% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 686.0 1615.20841683 42% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 141.0 315.596192385 45% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86524822695 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 4.20363070211 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.82270161449 2.80592935109 136% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 176.041082164 47% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581560283688 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 64.8 506.74238477 13% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 0.5 1.60771543086 31% => Avg_syllables_per_word is low.

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 141.0 20.2975951904 695% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 686.0 106.682146367 643% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 141.0 20.7667163134 679% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.0 7.06120827912 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 47.0 5.01903807615 936% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0430838581495 0.244688304435 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430838581495 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0430838581495 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 72.0 13.0946893788 550% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 21.42 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 45.3 11.3001002004 401% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.15 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.75 8.58950901804 137% => OK
difficult_words: 10.0 78.4519038076 13% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 51.0 9.78957915832 521% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 58.4 10.1190380762 577% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.