Some people think that politicians have the greatest influence on the world. Other people believe that scientists have the greatest influence. Discuss both views sand give your opinion?
Having the contribution of both the politicians and the scientists severd countries are developing and growing with the fast pace of time. Many individuals opine that the regime representatives have the greatest aura or influence on the entire world, however other people come up with an idea that the scientists have a colossal impression. This essay will articulate the both aforementioned notions with my perspective.
Commencing with the most salient and prominent aspects which are associated with the politicians is, they maintain the laws and regulations along with the protection of fundamental rights of the plebians. What is more, the politicians have the power to make and implement the laws for the wellfare of the nation. Apart from it, the accountabilities to bestow justice and job opportunities for the citizens of a country is an another prospect of this phenomenon. In order to provide numerous amenities, the regime launch several schemes, subsidies as well, for example, the clean India mission is a well-known initiative, which was started by the honourable incumbent prime minister mr. Narender Modi, on 2 oct 2015 in terms of celebrate the 175th anniversary of Mahatma Gandhi. Thereby, these types of policies and initiatives are only taken by the holistic regime not by scientists.
Although the government plays a great role in the development of a nation. On the other hand, the scientists have their own importance in terms of evolving the country and the world too. Then first and foremost fact is, the discoveries ar breakthroughs which are invented the scientists with their efforts, whether it is about the technology in the current scenario. With the access of mobile phones, sattelites or air travel the utter world is being developed by the inventions of the science. Instead of it, in the medical field, which is reached on the pinnacle of success by the joint endeavours of the scientists. It is also be possible just because of scientists to cure deadly diseases such as cancer, AIDS and even corona too.
To conclude, although the whole world is on the way of progress by each and every means of media, i believe that the betterment of a nation can not be accessible without the contribution of both the scientists and politicians as well. Therefore, the development of the country, even though the entire world, is fully depend on these two crucial elements.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: a prospect; another prospect
...nities for the citizens of a country is an another prospect of this phenomenon. In order to provide...
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... the holistic regime not by scientists. Although the government plays a great role in th...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...ndeavours of the scientists. It is also be possible just because of scientists to ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...gress by each and every means of media, i believe that the betterment of a nation...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
... even though the entire world, is fully depend on these two crucial elements.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, so, then, therefore, well, apart from, for example, such as, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2007.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 394.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09390862944 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96706152543 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555837563452 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6812953003 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.058823529 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1764705882 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206186129003 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057324499058 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835931799847 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131027019002 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103179979029 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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