In some countries people who are unemployed receive a sum of money each week in the form of a benefit. While some support this, other people believe that this money should not be given. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this contemporary epoch, unemployment become a global menace due to population explosion. Some people are of the opine that, it is the first assignment of regime to impart monetary endorsement to unemployed folks. By contrast, others have conflicting views. This essay tend to account both the views with my perspective.
To commence with, the people can manage their household outlays with granted money to live prosperous life. To eludicate, people especially who are married encounter distant heardships while fulfilling the basic needs of their family like food, shelter and clothes. Consequently, a commendable role is played by the assistance which is given by higher authorities in order to upsurge the living standard of civilians. Moreover, some people who are disabled and unable to perform the work. Therefore, they are suffering from starvation, criticism and health disorders under the absence of financial aid. Thence, folks should be provided with the monetary assistance from the regime. on the contrary, it it has darker side too.
Initially, higher authorities, especially in thriving nations have to face financial instabilities if they are supposed to be helping the unemployed citizen with the finance as they already under the burden of providing supreme amenities to its residents. People are expected to underestimate the importance of toiling hard in the presence of financial help from higher authorities. Therefore, the idea of giving financial help to unemployed people has big bag of demerits.
To recapitulate, the ultimate goal of modern government is to be blessed the people with happy life.
According to my notion, a balanced and logical approach should be adopted by the government while allocating the funds to different fields.
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- Many people try to find a balance between their work and other aspects of their life However few actually achieve this What solution can you suggest 73
- Some people think that government should invest in arts and cultural events others think that government should invest money on more important things 67
- Some people believe that future planning is a waste of time and should be avoided How far do you agree or disagree with this 67
- Some people believe that extreme sports should be banned To what extend do you agree or disagree 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, hence, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47636363636 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98414543328 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.8551481538 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.125 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24801206305 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720854877535 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471880138527 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119066990744 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533559906574 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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