In countries like Japan, the population is getting older, are the effects of aging population on society is a negative or positive. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Advancement in technology, medical and food sector blessed the folks to enjoy their lives for maximum years. Presently, it has become a sparked debatable whether aging population has constructive and negative impact on community. Therefore, I would like to throw light on both views with my prospective.
A bunch of points can be mentioned to shore up its benefits. First and foremost, the presence of grey generation plays a phenomenal role in order to Nourish the youngsters with moral, cultural and social ethics. Thence, a nation, may be able to produce nobel characters who are obedient, humble and more liberal. Moreover, late adulthood is fruitful for working sector as they are veteran of life stages and know very well how to run an enterprise due to their life experience. Besides this, the role of old people is terrific to create discipline and respect among family members. Hence, people can live a prosperous life, having aging people in their family. On the other side, it has darker side too.
Initially, grey headed people accustomed to conventional ways and less interested to technological advancement. Adding to it, old people are less tech savvy, creative, adaptive and energetic to perform work in efficient manner as compared to youngblood which may effect the productivity of a nation. There is no doubt that late adulthood act as a stumbling block in the progress of a nation. Furthermore, the lack of understanding an adjustment may be on the rise due to having different thinking between old and young civilians which might be the major reason behind emerging the contentions between them.
To recapitulate, it is well said that"old is gold". Therefore, stimulating grey generation towars technological uses can be worthwhile to get the best out of them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, while, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18900343643 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98946951822 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635738831615 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9005378509 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.375 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0720819146666 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0230526387452 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461429780583 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0522518878359 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631488441224 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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