In countries like Japan, the population is getting older, are the effects of aging population on society is a negative or positive. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Advancement in technology, medical and food sector blessed the folks to enjoy their lives for maximum years. Presently, it has become a sparked debatable whether aging population has constructive and deconstructive impact on community. Therefore, I would like to throw light on both views with my prospective.
A bunch of points can be mentioned to substantiate its brighter side. First and foremost, the presence of grey generation plays a phenomenal role in order to Nourish the youngsters with moral, cultural and social ethics. Thence, a nation, may be able to produce nobel characters who are obedient, humble and more liberal. Moreover, late adulthood could be fruitful for working sector as they are veteran of life stages and know very well how to run an enterprise due to their life experience. Therefore, productivity of an organisation are expected to accelerate on account of having well skilled staff. Besides this, the role of old people is terrific to create discipline and respect among family members. Hence, people can live a prosperous life, having aging people in their family. On the other side, it has darker side too.
Initially, grey headed people accustomed to conventional ways and resist to adopt technological methods. Adding to it, old people are less brisky, creative, adaptive and energetic to perform work in efficient manner as compared to youngblood. There is no doubt that late adulthood act as a stumbling block in the progress of a nation. Furthermore, the lack of understanding an adjustment may be on the rise due to having different thinking between old and young civilians which might be the major reason behind emerging the contentions between them.
To recapitulate, undeniably, this trend has few demerits. However,I still believe that the merits of this trend outstrip them by leaps and bounds.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, well, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24662162162 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9353559191 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658783783784 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5350771007 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3529411765 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4117647059 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23529411765 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0486890387835 0.244688304435 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0157624107221 0.084324248473 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380310980342 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0362081043705 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571905257343 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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