Many animal species in the world are becoming extinct nowadays. Some people say that countries and individuals should protect these animals from dying out, while others say that we should concentrate more on problems human beings. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Well, animals are the elegant creatures on this earth which add character to the beauty of earth. Presently, animal species are at the low ebb on account of disgraceful activities of human beings. Therefore, some folks are assert that it is the prime obligation of nation and individuals to bestow safe ambience to beats. By contact, others are more concerned about hardships of human beings. Here, I would like to throw light on both the views with my prospective.
Numerous points can be considered to substantiate the former point of view. Firstly, creatures plays a predominant role in balancing the food chain circle. To justify, the small beasts consume leaves which are eat by big animals. Hunters get their livelihood by killing big animals. Hence, giving protection to animal species is the need of an hour for the maintenance of ecology. Moreover, the animals such as cow, buffalo, sheep and horse gives milk, dung and wool to people which helps civilians to earn a chunk of money by selling such products. Therefore,the protection of creatures contribute remarkably in financial and prosperous live. On the other hand, it has thorny side too.
Initially, folks on thriving naton are suffering from unemployment, starvation, illiteracy and poverty. Consequently, it must necessary for regions and individuals to pay more attention on this concerns rather than being focus on preservation of animal species. Besides this, some people believe that ' everything is made for human but human is not made for everything' . Thence, concentration on restraining human related concerns appeals more significant.
To recapitulate, undeniably , human is blessed with power to rule over the world. However, I still believe that excellence of human beings is inherited in the consciousness for the betterment of every living category without being arrogant of power.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, well, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33220338983 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94080326904 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64406779661 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4967781225 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7894736842 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5263157895 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05263157895 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226875908116 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577893137359 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396789929683 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121952153557 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268997468665 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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