"Failure is the proof that desire was not strong enough", To what extend do you agree with this statement? give reasons for your answer?
In this contemporary epoch, everyone wants to get register their name in the book of success. Given statement claim that, failure is the result of having less strong desire. Undeniably,there are other various factors behind becoming unsuccessful. Here, I would like to discord with the given statement firmly.
A bunch of points can be considered to substantiate my point of view. Firstly, lack of perfect planning for achieving target, hard work with positive attitude is responsible to make someone unsuccessful. To elucidate, hard work act as a tonic to bring out the maximum potential of a person whereas appropriate planning always guide the people in correct direction as what to do, when to do and how to implement plans in a right way. Consequently, the absence of such factors is a major reason behind becoming the victim of failure.
The another predominant factor behind being unsuccessful that I consider is less dedication towards work, goal oriented approach for the achievement of their objectives. To demonstrate, some civilians have two or more targets so, they do not properly concentrate on their goal in an effective manner which reduce the efficiency of work. Besides this, some folks do not pay excessive heed to their target as they start to neglect their benchmark destination. It is apparently seen that flaws in such factor contribute remarkable in making the folks and successful.
To recapitulate, the absence of vibrant desire makes someone to feel nosedive. However, I still believe that the role of hard work, dedication and goal oriented approach cannot be underestimated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, so, still, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25581395349 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0223314031 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639534883721 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5606794309 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8571428571 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129362580055 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408822129062 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357402450293 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0719299401584 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367050678618 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.