Nowadays more and more people prefer to buy fashionable clothes. Does this have positive or negative effect. Give reasons and example to support your answer.
In the 21st century fashion has overtaken by world. What was once seen as basic need (clothing) has now turned into a style in this modern era. In this contemporary epoch, majority of masses have the tendency to buy trendy attires under the influence of air of fashion. In my view, I strongly accord to the fact that buying more and more fashionable outfits have adverse effects on folks. I substantiate my position by throwing light on some negative effects that this trend hold.
Firstly, people are becoming extravagant as they have the interest to buy fashionable attires . To demonstrate, companies bring attractive attires in the market in the form of market strategies to allure people towards buying these costumes. Therefore, becoming spendthrift is the result of buying trendy clothes under the influence of elegant looking. Moreover, the tendency of buying ravishing attires bring the value of traditional outfits at the back seat as trendy costumes are on the priority list of folks. Furthermore, the consecutive production of fashionable clothes likely to have detrimental effects on ambience as it requires natural resources for production and packaging material. On the other side, it has darker side too.
Initially, the role of buying modish costumes is terrific to give a captivating appearance to folks. Hence, people can add character to their personality by wearing designer clothes and show their status in society. Besides this, an ample number of employment opportunities are provided by this approach to the people as it requires great deal of laborers, models, manufacturers and designers for persistently production of catchy dresses.
To recapitulate, undeniably, a person is considered to be outdated if he cannot match up with latest trend. However, I reiterate my self that this fade has more deconstructive effect on people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31525423729 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96971566029 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593220338983 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2255847191 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311753376866 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905665010033 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685984455999 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168165564714 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0815810238302 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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