Some people believe that students should pay their University fees themselves as they benefit from having University studies and not the society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Education sets the pillar of success in everyone's life. Presently, some proportion of masses assert that it is responsibility of University students to manage their fee without any support from family and social organisations. Here, I would like to this discord with the given statement firmly.
A bunch of points can be mentioned to support my point of view. First and foremost, University students, who are symbol of modern and energetic workforce, play a role to flourish the economy of a nation and well-being of mankind. To make it clear, University's education emerges prodigious professionals such as teachers, engineers, doctor's and so on and it contributes more in the progress of a country. Taking the example of an profession into consideration, a medical students will expected to become highly competent doctor who can save thousands of peoples lives and serve humanity. Therefore, putting the burden of tuition fees on students can act as a stumbling block for students to going further in education road and a country may lack prodigious professionals. Hence, this approach does not fully holds water.
Probing ahead, imposing the financial burden on students shoulders is not a prudent idea as it may put extra pressure on students to do work along with study in order to manage their fee. Therefore, students may become unable to maintain balance between learning and working. As a result, this approach could discouraged children to attain tertiary education. Higher illiterate rate leads to higher crime rate as people are expected to engage in nasty habits like robbery, snatching and murder in order to earn money. Therefore, regime should provide subsidies to students to stimulate them towards education in order to set the foundation of prosperous nation.
To recapitulate, taking above points into consideration I believe that Government and society ought to share joint responsibility to pay fees of University students as they contribute remarkably in the development of nation as well as community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ess of a country. Taking the example of an profession into consideration, a medica...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'student'?
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Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'hold'
Suggestion: hold
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Suggestion: discourage
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, may, so, therefore, well, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3198757764 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00686719653 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.028806527 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.2 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21716361344 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566804592825 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649566489346 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134223582176 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388493616339 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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