Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve the growing traffic and pollution problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?what other measures and do you think might be effective?
In parallel to advancement in technology and hiking demand of vehicles, the problem of traffic and pollution has increased significantly. Presently, some proportion of masses assert that the price of petrol is a stupendous way to tackle these worrying concerns. I am strongly disagree with this statement and i believe, besides increasing the price of petrol,there are several methods to curb these threats.
Numerous points can be considered to support my point of view. First and foremost, increasing the price of petrol will lead to a rise in headline inflation. To demonstrate, higher price of petrol will indirectly affect the price of other goods such as food, medicines, clothes and so on in the market through increasing the cost of their transportation. Thence, this Trend can put adverse effect on citizens of a nation especially on middle class and destitute people. Moreover, upsurging the rate of petrol will surely throw the business of automobile industry at the back seat as people will not use personal vehicle owing to this trend. Therefore, unlike controlling the problem of grid-lock and contamination, this trend will create new problems.
Other liable measures must be taken by regime to cope up with this concerns. Initially, government should not only improve the public transportation but also increased their availability around the clock. This initial step would definitely stimulate people to public transportation and will resulted in the decrease of traffic jam as well as reduced the toxic emissions in ambience. Besides this, some transport policies must be taken by higher authorities. For instance, in London, there is congestion charge and it must be adopted by all nations which would help them to reduce traffic jam, and emission of detrimental gases, and help to reduce air pollution.
To recapitulate, I am strongly oppose with the idea of enhancing the price of petrol to restrain this worrying concerns. Therefore, I still believe that it is the first assignment of government to take some other remedial measures to nip the problem of traffic and pollution from the bud.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, well, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25958702065 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94840672534 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563421828909 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8426647544 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.4375 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1875 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242276574945 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787100635804 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440866503607 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152263819559 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407736131282 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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