The map shows the changes of an office building between present and the future.
The first illustration provides information about current layout of an office building and the second shows how it will look after redevelopment.
The most striking feature to be observed is that substantial changes will be seen in an office building.
In the light of evidence, it is a crystal clear that at present, the building has two grass zones to the left and right side. The left one will be converted with
an outside seating area and three rows of chairs. A coffee machine, meeting area and two rows of chairs will be introduced to the right side of the building.
After scrutinizing the chart, currently, the main entrance is located on the right side. However, in future, it will be relocated to the centre. At the moment, there are four small offices however, in the future, these rooms will be constituted by two big offices. In future, kitchen and canteen will be replaced by officers. The storeroom will exist without any change. As far as comparisons are concerned, more offices are predicted to seen in future than present. Greenery will be reduced in future than present time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ide. The left one will be converted with an outside seating area and three rows o...
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Line 8, column 99, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... is located on the right side. However, in future, it will be relocated to the centre. At...
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Line 8, column 266, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the future'?
Suggestion: In the future
...will be constituted by two big offices. In future, kitchen and canteen will be replaced b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, look, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89361702128 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6327584262 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574468085106 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5827656623 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6666666667 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196573103592 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725367758649 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751641666747 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114521915946 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557582838515 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.