In some countries population is getting older, are the benefits of Aging population on society is negative for positive. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The advancement in technology, medical and food sector have surely allowed the folks to enjoy the life for maximum years. Presently, it become a debatable whether aging population has constructive or the deconstructive impact on the society or not. Here I would like to throw light on both the views with my perspective.
There are multifarious benefits of this phenomenon. First and foremost, the presence of grey generation plays a phenomenol role in order to nourish the youngsters moral, cultural and social ethics. Thence, a nation may be able to produce noble character who are obedient, humble and more liberal. Moreover, late adulthood could be fruitful for working sector as they are veteran of life stages and know well how to run an enterprise due to their life experience. Therefore, productivity of an organisation are expected to accelerate on account of having well experienced staff. Besides this, the role of old people is terrific to create discipline and respect among family members. Hence, people can lead a prosperous life. On the contrary, it has darker side too.
Initially, grey headed people is accustomed to conventional ways and less interested to be technically advanced. Adding to it, old people are less risky, creative, adaptive and energetic to perform work as compared to youngblood. There is no doubt that late adulthood act as stumbling block in the progress of a nation. Furthermore, lack of understanding and adjustment may be on the rise due to having different thinking between old and young which might be the major reason behind emerging contentions between them.
To recapitulate, undeniably, the aging population have some negative impact on society. According to my opinion, stimulating old people towards the use of technology can be worthwhile to get the best out of it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, while, no doubt, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21428571429 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00914313138 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6807981195 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1764705882 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2941176471 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124364582206 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380378318563 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644648922316 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093197203762 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830648286682 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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