Some people believe that extreme sports should be banned. To what extend do you agree or disagree.
In this contemporary epoch, there is a conundrum among the folks whether action sports should be outlawed by countries or not. My view points are not at the same wavelength with the given statement and I shall portray my view point in the subsequent paragraphs.
Myraid of points can be mentioned to substantiate my point of view. First and foremost, putting restriction on such games could be extremely disappointing for players of such games along with the spectators. To elucidate, great prestigious along with money has been earned by numerous players such as the Great Khali (wrestling), Ken block (car racing), Jeb coreless (sky driver) in dangerous sports. Consequently, prohibition on such games not only destroy the career of already eminent players but also affects the future of young emerging player who bur their midnight oil in such games. Therefore, the idea of putting restrictions on adventurous sports does not deserves appreciation.
Further increasing on my point of view. To commence with, banning on thrilling games has some negative impacts on the people who are engaged in sports industry and commercial world. To demonstrate, massive number of people involved in thrilling sports such as ground staff, trainers and physicians are likely to lose their job if this games are banned by nations. Furthermore, many companies are earning hefty amount of money on account of broadcasting live events of such events. As a result, many organisation lost their employment opportunities owing to restriction on adventurous games.
To recapitulate, Although dangerous sports has a few drawbacks yet, the benefits of this games cannot be underestimated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34600760456 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01786188381 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61216730038 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3948752066 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.153846154 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128078906651 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474092594115 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527401985154 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.080792929158 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248908741435 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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