Nowadays companies and other organisations are requiring their employees to wear a uniform. Think about jobs where uniform is important? What are the advantages and disadvantages of wearing a uniform?
Uniform combines someone with ideal principles appealing to well being of working sector. In this contemporary epoch, organisations introduced the concept of wearing uniform. Here, this essay will account for positive and negative impacts of this trend along with fields where uniform is required.
To commence with, without uniform a working site look like "a ship without sailor". There are plenty of organisations such as schools, colleges, hospital, factory, institutions and engineer's working sites where uniform is considered as an integral part of their working sector.
As far as its positive side are concerned, the role of allowing uniforms at companies or other working firms is terrific to emerge the sense of unity among diversity. Moreover, uniform act as a symbol of identification for working civilians related to distant organisations. Adding to it, allowing uniform in different associations prevents people from being extravagant as wearing formal outfits are not allowed which restrict them to spend on trendy attires. As a result, the idea of allowing uniforms at workplace has a big bag of merits.
A bunch of points can be mentioned to explain its darker side. Initially, destitute people especially in thriving nations are anticipated to encounter financial crisis by purchasing dress of schools and colleges for their Juveniles. Furthermore, people may feel monotonous by wearing same coloured dress regularly.Thence, wearing uniform in working organisations holds no importance.To recapitulate, allowing uniforms to workforce has both constructive and negative effects on employees and organisations. Therefore, both personnel and entrepreneurs should take a joint responsibility to remove it's darker side too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77992277992 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21472106227 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637065637066 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7546330015 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.153846154 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305551615498 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107705899657 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770870023023 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182449906432 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278657714049 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.24 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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