The 2 tables provide data about the temperature level as well as the sunrise and sunset time in London and Sydney from Friday 28th to 30th December 2018.
Overall, in this duration, it was much hotter in Sydney than in London with higher temperatures which gradually increased during the whole weekend and longer times between sunrise and sunset.
During the weekend in December 2018, the capital of the UK received an average temperature level of 3 censuses to 13 censuses. The coolest day in the weekend was Friday 28th, with the min temperatures of 4 Celsius and the max of 9 Celcius. The hottest day was Sunday with 5 Celcius min and 10 Celcius max. The hours of daylight in London this weekend was around 8, with the longest period of 7 hours and 5 minutes.
By contrast, in Sydney, the temperatures were much higher, ranging from 17 to 31. The coolest day (Friday) received the min of 17 Celcius and the max of 26 Celcius, 4 and 3 times respectively higher than London's min, max temperatures. On Sunday 30th, the figure rose to 19 and 31. In Sydney, the sun rose and set on an average of nearly 15 hours, with a max of 952 minutes on Saturday 29th.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 303, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'max' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'maces', 'maxes'.
Suggestion: maces; maxes
...unday with 5 Celcius min and 10 Celcius max. The hours of daylight in London this w...
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Line 3, column 308, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... with 5 Celcius min and 10 Celcius max. The hours of daylight in London this weeken...
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Line 4, column 359, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...verage of nearly 15 hours, with a max of 952 minutes on Saturday 29th.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50476190476 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51886307723 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514285714286 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4691451564 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6 5.23603664747 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136932617206 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598226106466 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402409627034 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0915465324655 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0146432594579 0.0819641961636 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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