Education play a vital role in our life its provide a good path to getting success. some people think that getting a higher education such as college or universities that give a best way and direction to success in their life, while other believe that its excellent to get a work after graduate from school. I think studying at university is good option for their career,
On the one hand, people argue that studying at higher education is wasting money and as well as time, so people think it is good way get job after school and make your life. They believe after school people can earn a lot of money rather than waste your income on further education so its important to start work after school and full fill your desire. For instance, one person start working after school and they earn lots of money at the age of 24 and they enjoy their happy life.
On the other hand, studying at university is better to start your career after school because university provide a way of success such how to start career and people can get more and more knowledge from their experience teachers and people could get maturity they can learn communication and h0w to start and exceed your own business this all thing teach in university. My opinion is that people should get higher education because country will get success nationally and internationally when their youth are educate. For example, my cousin start their small business after school and their business was running smoothly but they do not know how to excide their business into international market and how to invest in business so for that time education will help you.
In conclude, people have different view regarding higher education some people view that after school is better option to getting success in their life while, other think its good that studying at university. My point is that getting higher education is not only better for life but also for their career.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'plays'.
Suggestion: plays
Education play a vital role in our life its provide a ...
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Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Education) must be used with a third-person verb: 'plays'.
Suggestion: plays
Education play a vital role in our life its provide a ...
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Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...provide a good path to getting success. some people think that getting a higher educ...
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Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ch as college or universities that give a best way and direction to success in th...
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Line 5, column 510, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'educated'.
Suggestion: educated
...nd internationally when their youth are educate. For example, my cousin start their sma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77976190476 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34646903881 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.446428571429 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.9321320614 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.6 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.6 20.7667163134 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364587089582 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170531737742 0.084324248473 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112676018939 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253857694054 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536232180541 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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